woooooooow I LOVE the rain!!!! One of the scenes I imagined myself doing () besides Sesshoumaru was jumping in the puddles, and now him giving the sweethearts permision to do it, its heart-warming !!!!
You really captured the feeling of a playful rainy day excellently. Shippou and Rin are having fun, and everyone else is sitting around and being all serene. :] I really love the way you used your marker to draw in the rain, it looks excellent and is also unique to anything else I've seen concerning rain.
Um, somewhere with Sango and Kirara...? They weren't written into the chapter, but I confess they didn't even cross my mind. Miroku's stick is missing too, along with the Inu brothers' swords and Sess' fluffy thing. Bad me.